Talk:Robert Evans (journalist)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 16:54, 31 August 2020 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:54, 31 August 2020 (UTC)

• Not sure why this is in MilHist, but I'll give it a shot regardless
• Spell out EMT before using the abbreviation.

Y Jlevi (talk) 15:25, 19 September 2020 (UTC)

• Did he finish his EMT cert or did he drop that too?

Good question! I don't know. I'd actually be curious to hear your opinion on this whole 'Early life' subsection. Right now, almost no reliable source describes Robert's personal life. This is currently sourced to a podcast. Should the section be dropped? This probably applies to the 'political beliefs' section too. Jlevi (talk) 15:25, 19 September 2020 (UTC)

I've waffled over this a bit, but I think that you're right. He's not a reliable source about his own life, as absurd as that appears on the face of it. I've seen too many cases where people exaggerate things in their favor; so go ahead and delete early life and political beliefs.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:44, 30 September 2020 (UTC)

• used commentary and writing of Evans' awkward

See diff. Better? Jlevi (talk) 15:25, 19 September 2020 (UTC)

Much.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:44, 30 September 2020 (UTC)

• Link 4chan, tear gas, grenade, anarchism, social safety net, small government

Y Jlevi (talk) 15:25, 19 September 2020 (UTC)

• On Saturday August 22, comma after Saturday

Y Jlevi (talk) 15:25, 19 September 2020 (UTC)

• force at the protest protests

Y Jlevi (talk) 15:25, 19 September 2020 (UTC)

• government but also comma after government

Y Jlevi (talk) 15:25, 19 September 2020 (UTC)

• Be consistent about using title case in the article title in your refs--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:27, 14 September 2020 (UTC)

You missed #9, 11, 14--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:44, 30 September 2020 (UTC)

Thanks for taking up the review! Jlevi (talk) 15:25, 19 September 2020 (UTC)

@Sturmvogel 66: @Jlevi: Thanks for taking the time to review my nomination!--Prisencolin (talk) 05:50, 1 October 2020 (UTC)