Talk:Rob Pelinka/GA1
Latest comment: 15 years ago by Wizardman in topic GA Review
GA Review edit
At this time, I am going to fail this, because I feel that this article needs a lot of work yet to be a GA.
- Citation #5 is blank.
- Kobe Bryant section has a fact tag on it.
- Education and Honors should be converted into prose.
- By that same token, some facts are both pointed out and discussed twice, plus with the way it's written the lead seems like the high school and college paragraph rather then a lead.
- Can the Maggette and Gordon sections be expanded? If not try to make it so that there's not a bunch of two sentence paragraphs.
Wizardman 20:06, 28 June 2008 (UTC)