Talk:Ritual (Tiësto, Jonas Blue and Rita Ora song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 09:50, 17 February 2023 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I will get on with this right away! --K. Peake 09:50, 17 February 2023 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Should dance really be included as a genre in the infobox if dance-pop is already?
• Wouldn't "in various countries" be more appropriate right after the formats?
• "it was met with a warm reception" → "the song received a warm reception"
• "the music of the song and" → "the music of it and"
• "including in Canada, Norway," → "including Canada, Norway,"
• Poland should come before the certification body in that sentence
• Pipe neon light to Neon lighting

Background and composition

• "Few days prior its release," → "A few days prior its release,"
• Mention in the release sentence that it was for digital download and streaming in various countries
• The duration is not sourced
• Again, should dance be mentioned as a genre if dance-pop already is?

Reception

• Maybe merge this with the below section and retitle to Reception and promotion per that being only one para?
• "to blend "driving instrumentals [...]" → "to blend a "driving instrumental [...]"
• "ready to dance."" → "ready to dance"." per MOS:QUOTE
• "kickstart the weekend" → "kickstart your weekend" per the source's wording
• "foresaw it "to reign supreme in clubs" → "foresaw it as "destined to rule clubs" per above
• "it peaked at number 13" → "the song peaked at number 13"

Music video

• Pipe neon lights to Neon lighting
• "Ora's appearance, stating that "she's" → "Ora's appearance, stating: "She's"

Track listing

• Should acoustic really be capitalised?

Charts

• Good

Certifications

• Good

Release history

• Good

References

• Copyvio score looks great at 23.1%!!!
• Pipe Billboard to Billboard (magazine) on ref 6
• Cite Musicnotes.com as publisher instead on ref 8
• Wikilink The Music Network on ref 10
• Wikilink Rolling Stone on ref 13
• Remove HRT from brackets on ref 20
• Should OCC really be in brackets on ref 76?

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until all of the issues are fixed; that went smoothly as expected! --K. Peake 11:01, 17 February 2023 (UTC)

• Hey @Kyle Peake: long time no see :D. Everything was addressed and thanks for the review! Iaof2017 (talk) 15:02, 17 February 2023 (UTC)

  @Iaof2017 ✓ Pass now, however can you edit the talk page since I'm not able to on mobile? K. Peake 17:35, 17 February 2023 (UTC)