Talk:Rio Grande (company)

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Leojuan in topic Use of Adjectives and Promotional Tone

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I want to be a supplier of jewellery that we are presently manufacturing in Jaipur and Mumbai. namely: Silver jewellery in Electroform of excellent Quality Silver jewellery casted, with cz's, coloured stones precious and semiprecious too. Hollow silver idols in 925 silver purity Gold jewellery studded with real diamonds casting process

We produce items such as Rings, Earrings, Pendants, Bangles, Necklaces, Bracelets, Cuff links, etc.

Our Production capacity is 100,000 pieces plus per month.

We export to Europe, USA, South East Asia, Japan, Russia and also the Middle East

If you require excellent Quality at a competitive price, do give us the opportunity to meet your esteemed company, preferably in Mumbai or Jaipur.

Surely your representative comes down to Mumbai.

I remain, Respectfullly,

Archie Glenn Valentine Director Yeswin Enterprises LLP Jaipur

Use of Adjectives and Promotional Tone edit

The article reads quite promotional. It is not written in an encyclopedic way and needs a clean up. There were bunch of inappropriate external links which I've already removed. You can read the Wikipedia guideline on how to add the external links. Moreover, the article needs additional citations for verification. Leojuan (talk) 14:50, 14 March 2023 (UTC)Reply