Talk:Richard Orsini/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 21:22, 5 February 2023 (UTC)

Will take on all three related articles. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 21:22, 5 February 2023 (UTC)

Criteria

GA Criteria
GA Criteria: 1 1.a Y 1.b Y 2 2.a Y 2.b Y 2.c Y 2.d Y 3 3.a Y 3.b Y 4 4.a Y 5 5.a Y 6 6.a Y 6.b Y

• No DAB links Y
• No dead links Y
• No missing citations Y
• Passes spot checks Y

Prose Suggestions

Please note that almost all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion. Any changes I deem necessary for the article to pass GA standards I will bold.

Lede

• Recommend expanding the lede with details of his military campaign and death, but I think it still satisfies lede coverage as is.

Family

• his first wife is unknown perhaps the identity of his first wife is unknown
• @Cplakidas: That is all of my suggestions, passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 21:41, 5 February 2023 (UTC)