Talk:Richard Orsini/GA1
Latest comment: 1 year ago by Iazyges in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 21:22, 5 February 2023 (UTC)
Will take on all three related articles. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 21:22, 5 February 2023 (UTC)
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Criteria
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- No DAB links
- No dead links
- No missing citations
- Passes spot checks
Discussion
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editPlease note that almost all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion. Any changes I deem necessary for the article to pass GA standards I will bold.
Lede
edit- Recommend expanding the lede with details of his military campaign and death, but I think it still satisfies lede coverage as is.
Family
edit- his first wife is unknown perhaps the identity of his first wife is unknown
- @Cplakidas: That is all of my suggestions, passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 21:41, 5 February 2023 (UTC)