Talk:Richard Edelman/Archives/2013
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Correcting Birthplace
Hi All -
My names is Jon Silver - I work for Edelman in their Global Marketing department. We noticed that Richard's birthplace is incorrect. He was born in Chicago, IL, not Brooklyn, NY. Information on his childhood can be found here: http://www.scribd.com/doc/120880915/Edelman-and-the-Rise-of-Public-Relations
Figuring this is factual information and not an issue of positioning or emphasis, I figured this would only improve the page and falls within these guidelines.
Jonmsilver (talk) 15:20, 16 October 2013 (UTC)
Notes
I gave the article a read-through after Smartse mentioned it. It had a lot of content that was well-sourced, but I just didn't feel belongs on his Wikipedia profile, such as commentary about his personality. I'm not sure if we need the Appointments section or not - it uses mostly primary sources, but it is a pretty default type of information for a bio on a business person. CorporateM (Talk) 00:13, 28 October 2013 (UTC)