Talk:Riccardo Montolivo/GA1
Latest comment: 10 years ago by Cloudz679 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Cloudz679 (talk · contribs) 12:40, 4 February 2014 (UTC)
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I will review the article. C679 12:40, 4 February 2014 (UTC)
- Horrible prose, e.g. "Montolivo is a graduate of Atalanta", "Atalanta became fifth and promoted to Serie A by playoffs", "He was given number 18 jersey", "His good form earned his a spot", etc. Also contains "citation needed" tags, pov ("one of the best talents", "he was as one of the best", also grammatically incorrect), and incorrect grammatical tenses (e.g. "he expressed that the departure of Dainelli and Martin Jorgensen has weakened the team"). Jargon is over-present, e.g. brace, penned a contract (2x), opened his account). The article continues very much in the same vein and is not close to meeting the Good Article criteria at the moment. C679 12:50, 4 February 2014 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.