Talk:Ricardo Arias Calderón/GA1
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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 17:28, 1 August 2013 (UTC)
Review will commence soon. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 17:28, 1 August 2013 (UTC)
Infobox & lead edit
A pass here.
Background edit
I am still bemused as to why aestheticism, "public stiffness", and aloofness would garner the sobriquet "Arias Cardinal Calderon", but even if it does, you need the proper diacritics for Calderón in every mention of the name.
Early political career edit
"...the couple spent another month in exile in Miami." When was the first instance?
Vice presidency edit
This is merely a suggestion, but I suggest you add information about the selection of Calderón, if possible.
- I don't have that available, unfortunately. As the article notes, Calderon was president of a party that was a member of an anti-Noriega coalition, so presumably his VP selection helped appeal to that party of the coalition--but I don't have specifics. -- Khazar2 (talk) 17:23, 4 August 2013 (UTC)
Later activity edit
"...a long-time opponent of the US presence in Panama..." The post-invasion presence, or the in media res-invasion presence? I am sure he was supportive of the invasion.
Done I'll just say "post-invasion" here for now, which I'm certain he opposed. -- Khazar2 (talk) 17:23, 4 August 2013 (UTC)
The rest of this section is fine, along with the last section.
Conclusion edit
This is a very sound article. As soon as everything is addressed, the article will pass. Congratulations! QatarStarsLeague (talk) 15:39, 4 August 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review & suggestions. Just let me know if you see anything further that needs work. -- Khazar2 (talk) 17:23, 4 August 2013 (UTC)
- Excellent work! The article passes. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 18:21, 4 August 2013 (UTC)