Talk:Revelations (The X-Files)

Latest comment: 11 years ago by Gen. Quon in topic GA Review
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DateProcessResult
September 22, 2007Articles for deletionKept
June 19, 2012Good article nomineeListed
December 23, 2012Good topic candidatePromoted
Current status: Good article

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Lemonade51 (talk · contribs) 16:57, 19 June 2012 (UTC)Reply

General

  • 1995–1996 should be 1995–96 per WP:YEAR
  • December 25, 2011 or 25 December 2011 – make sure ref dates are consistent

Plot

  • "Simon Gates, who strangles him, his hands smoking while he does so." replace comma between 'him' and 'his' with en or em dash.
  • 3 years → three years
  • "Meanwhile at an elementary school in Ohio a boy," place comma between Ohio and 'a'
  • "The agents arrive and meet with a social worker, who claims that Kevin has suffered injuries before and that his father was institutionalized, claiming that Kevin was in danger from evil forces." replace the bolded word with 'adding' to avoid repetition.
  • "two places at once is able", comma between 'once' and 'is'.

Production

  • post-production is hyphenated

Reception

  • an 7 out of 10 → a 7 out of 10

Otherwise, no problems with sourcing and imaging. On hold. -- Lemonade51 (talk) 17:09, 19 June 2012 (UTC)Reply

Thank you for the review. I believe I have addressed all the concerns.--Gen. Quon (talk) 20:55, 19 June 2012 (UTC)Reply