Talk:Return to Peyton Place (film)

Latest comment: 10 years ago by 69.95.203.81 in topic Need work

Need work edit

The article currently reads like a grade-C junior high book report. I've corrected some of the more obvious mistakes, but the article needs a major re-write (preferably by a literate adult) to translate it into an encylopedia article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.95.203.81 (talk) 00:21, 21 October 2013 (UTC)Reply