Talk:Regine at the Movies/GA1

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Onegreatjoke in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Onegreatjoke (talk · contribs) 18:56, 10 December 2022 (UTC)Reply


Hello! I have decided to review your nomination to see if your article can reach GA status. This is going to be my second GA review so I might make some mistakes here. If you see any then please notify me.

Alright! I have finished my review. I will put this review on hold as these problems are super easy to fix and shouldn't take long. Onegreatjoke (talk) 01:41, 11 December 2022 (UTC)Reply
Thanks Onegreatjoke for taking the time to review the article. I have addressed the items you've raised in prose and references. Pseud 14 (talk) 20:11, 11 December 2022 (UTC)Reply
Thanks for your work. Promoting. Onegreatjoke (talk) 20:34, 11 December 2022 (UTC)Reply

Prose edit

For the Synopsis section

  • "Velasquez spoke to the audience about her fascination of Baz Luhrmann's musical film Moulin Rouge! and continued to sing a medley of songs from the soundtrack album." should be --> "Velasquez spoke to the audience about her fascination with Baz Luhrmann's musical film Moulin Rouge! and continued to sing a medley of songs from the soundtrack album."

Alright. Time for the Reception and Recordings section.

  • "On November 24, 2018, the second night of the show was broadcast via pay-per-view live streaming on Kapamilya Box Office." It would probably be better to say livestreaming instead.

That's it for prose!

Referenced edit

  • Just a question. is there a way to access references 9 and 10 or are they offline? Other than that I have no problems.
  • Thanks for raising this one. The source is the referenced media itself per Cite AV media notes, which is generally used for credits/personnel, concert booklets/programs/setlist, or in plot and setting sections of films/tv series. Similar examples [1] [2] Pseud 14 (talk) 20:11, 11 December 2022 (UTC)Reply

Copyvio edit

Earwig found nothing. This section is a pass.

Broad edit

Article seems broad so this section is a pass.

Neutral edit

Article looks neutral so this section is a pass.

Stable edit

No edits since July. This section is a pass.

Media edit

Only image seems to qualify under fair use. This section is a pass.