Talk:Red Carpet (Namie Amuro song)
Latest comment: 7 years ago by Cartoon network freak in topic GA Review
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GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 15:41, 5 December 2016 (UTC)
Review arriving soon... Cartoon network freak (talk) 15:41, 5 December 2016 (UTC)
Lead
edit- Point, as the singer's third → Remove comma
- single; along with it came the B-side → single, being supported by B-side
- It was distributed → "Red Carpet" was distributed (word rep.)
- and for digital → and was made available for digital
- digital consumption → link to music download
- drums through its instrumentation → drums as instrumentation
- it focuses → you have already used "it" before; alternate
- reviews from music critics. Majority of the reviews commended → reviews from music critics, with them commending
- highlighted → highlighting
- was used as the commercial track to a campaign → was used for a campaign
- and included → and was included
- Japan, and additionally throughout Asia. → Japan and Asia.
Infobox
edit- CD and digital artwork. → Artwork used to physically and digitally commercialize the single (no full stop)
Background and release
edit- music video; she also added → music video, and unveiled
- the B-side track → its B-side track
- having released "Tsuki" (January 2014) and "Brighter Day" (November 2014) → having made available for purchase "Tsuki" (2014) and "Brighter Day" (2014)
- was used as the theme song to Japanese anime series → served as the opening theme for Japanese anime series
- whom previously → who previously
- and noted instrumentation of guitars → and described its instrumentation as consisting of guitars
- reporting from Land of Rising → writing for Land of Rising
- composition as a → composition a
- link "pop" to respective article on Wiki
- Add release year in brackets to the two linked singles
- Lyrically, it focuses → Do you mean "Red Carpet" here or "Black Make-Up"? If yes, then insert the title instead of "it"
- narcissism; subsequently, the line → narcissism, with the line,
- was described → being described
- the sound as an "upbeat neo soul tune" → the sound as "upbeat neo soul".
Release
edit- Please attach this section to the previous one
- Dimension Point, as the singer's → remove comma
- and for digital → and was made available for
- with two videos (the official music visual and the making of video) → with the single's official music video and behind-the-scenes footage
- red silk fabric, resembling the aesthetic of a red carpet; she is wearing the → red silk fabric, which resembles the aesthetic of a red carpet, wearing the
- The physical formats included → Physical releases of "Red Carpet"
Reception
edit- the composition production → the recording's production
- 'breaking any boundary or reaching outstanding levels..." → "breaking any boundary or reaching outstanding levels [...]"
- appeal; the review also highlighted → appeal, additionally highlighting
- the songs production and composition → the production and composition of "Red Carpet"
- esque content → esque vibe (word rep.)
- it debuted at number two on Oricon's weekly chart → it opened Oricon's weekly chart at number two
- copies, marking it the → copies and marking the
- first week → first-week
- Add year of release to other linked singles here
- highest charting → highest-charting
- after her triple → behind her triple
- units and marked its final week → units in its final week
- all hosted by → all published
Promotion
edit- on the singer's → onto the singer's
- sits down briefly → what is this supposed to mean?
- public out including → public, including
- walking about a flight of stairs → this is poor grammar and I don't get what you want to say.
- used on Japanese → used for Japanese
- as the commercial track → as the opening theme
- theme song to Japanese → theme song for Japanese
- in Japan, and additionally throughout Asia → in Japan and Asia
Credits and personnel
edit- flawless ;)
Charts
edit- You don't need two separate columns; render them together with the subtitle "Weekly charts"
Sales
edit- You don't need a separate section for the sales; please add it as a subsection to "Charts and sales"
Release history
edit- flawless ;)
Other stuff
editCopy-violation
edit- 2.9% is perfect!
Images and others
edit- Article is perfectly illustrated by cover artwork.
Links
editReferences
edit- For cases like Jpopasia.com or Namiestyle.co.jp, please write like this: JPop Asia, Namie Style
- As far as I was able to check them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article.
- No dead links! Good job!
- Good job with this! On hold! Cartoon network freak (talk) 12:49, 10 December 2016 (UTC)
- @Cartoon network freak: all done! CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk · contribs} 01:01, 18 December 2016 (UTC)
- Gladly passing! Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 11:02, 18 December 2016 (UTC)
- @Cartoon network freak: all done! CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk · contribs} 01:01, 18 December 2016 (UTC)
- Good job with this! On hold! Cartoon network freak (talk) 12:49, 10 December 2016 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.