Talk:Reckitt/Archives/2014
Latest comment: 9 years ago by Prof.Haddock in topic Advert - too much CSR detail, also unbalanced in other areas
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Advert - too much CSR detail, also unbalanced in other areas
In the context of a the business the CSR coverage is overblown -each of the sub-sections 6.1 Save the Children , 6.2 Carbon 20 , 6.3 betterbusiness , 6.4 RB Trees should merit a single sentence not several paragraphs.
Other areas are unbalanced - eg "operations" - One sentence of less than 20 worlds covers the company's entire manufacturing, research, marketting and backoffice research facilities. The graduate recruitment program gets an entire paragraph.
Section #logo is also advertising copy. #Gaviscon anti-competitive behaviour is too verbose - it doesn't need to be 6 paragraphs.
Prof.Haddock (talk) 05:20, 12 July 2014 (UTC)