Talk:Raymond Leane

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Peacemaker67 in topic Service Years
Featured articleRaymond Leane is a featured article; it (or a previous version of it) has been identified as one of the best articles produced by the Wikipedia community. Even so, if you can update or improve it, please do so.
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The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Raymond Leane was described as the "foremost fighting leader" in the Australian Imperial Force during World War I?
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Pre-GA tweaks

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Hi Peacemaker67, Thanks for another fine article. Here are some possible tweaks to consider before the GA review starts:

  • knighted for commissioner - appears twice in lede (1st para and 2nd last sentence)
  • consistencies:
    shell fire v shellfire
    counterattack v counter-attack /one word x 8, hyphenated x3
    Pioneer Trench v Pioneers Trench, 2 each
    Croix de guerre v Croix de Guerre
    Citizens' Forces v Citizen's Forces (actually, there are no apostrophes in its (AAR's) article)
    Times formats 4:30 am/4:00am/07:00/08:00/10:30/12:15/13:30/15:30/5:15/02:00/15:00/23:00
  • "Fighting Leane's of Prospect" - is the apostrophe in the Hurst ref?
  • Categories to add?:
    Recipients of the Croix de guerre 1914–1918 (France)
    Australian police chiefs
    Burials in South Australia
  • Categories to refine?:
    Australian Companions of the Order of St Michael and St George
    Australian Companions of the Order of the Bath‎
    Australian Knights Bachelor
    Australian recipients of the Military Cross
    Australian Companions of the Distinguished Service Order

Please ignore any that I have wrong:) Thanks again, JennyOz (talk) 08:30, 20 August 2017 (UTC)Reply

Thanks very much for taking a look, JennyOz! I've adjusted them all. With Citizens' Forces, I've used the apostrophe positioning used by papers of the time. Bit of a bug bear of mine, so not sure how that slipped through. Some crusty half-colonel once insisted we properly punctuate Officers' Mess as the possessive, ie the Mess belonging to the Officers... And now I'm stuck with it. Cheers, Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 10:10, 20 August 2017 (UTC)Reply
Looking good! (I agree with your half-colonel too.) One time format yet to fix... "surged forward at 5:15" should be 17:15? Thanks again, JennyOz (talk) 15:43, 20 August 2017 (UTC)Reply


Service Years

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@WP:MILHIST coordinators: -- It states in the infobox that he served from 1905 to 1938. World War II, was 1939 to 1945. Adamdaley (talk) 13:06, 24 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

Thanks Adam, fixed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 13:32, 24 January 2022 (UTC)Reply