Cleanup needed edit
Much of the article is just bulleted and cluttered lists. A lot of the article reads like a guide, in my opinion. Also, the story is a bit long. Perhaps a complete rewrite is needed? RobJ1981 11:25, 25 September 2007 (UTC)
Much of the article is just bulleted and cluttered lists. A lot of the article reads like a guide, in my opinion. Also, the story is a bit long. Perhaps a complete rewrite is needed? RobJ1981 11:25, 25 September 2007 (UTC)Reply