Talk:Rajkummar Rao/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Kailash29792 (talk · contribs) 16:03, 10 September 2020 (UTC)

I'll review today, comment tomorrow. --Kailash29792 (talk) 16:03, 10 September 2020 (UTC)

Early and personal life

No issues here, just write when his parents died. The source mentions the years.

Debut and other works (2010–2012)

• Cop is informal for police officer, so please replace.
• "The film, starring Aamir Khan, Rani Mukherji and Kareena Kapoor in the lead roles" - Remove in the lead roles since that's what starring means.
• Mukherji should be Mukerji since spellings matter in Bollywood.

Shahid and breakthrough (2013–2016)

• Please italicise Shahid since it is a film's title.

More to come later. Kailash29792 (talk) 11:45, 13 September 2020 (UTC)

All done. Kailash29792 do you have more queries? Yashthepunisher (talk) 04:48, 17 September 2020 (UTC)

Nothing more. There were just some ref formatting issues (such as the publisher field being used instead of website or work) but I fixed them myself. Though I will pass this GA review because the prose meets my expectations, I would have preferred if someone other than Twofingeredtypist (like Bafflegab or Miniapolis) performed the c/e since Twofingeredtypist's c/e almost always appears to be minimal. But congrats anyway. Kailash29792 (talk) 05:18, 17 September 2020 (UTC)

Thanks for the review. I never thought that I have an option while putting the GOCE request on who should edit the article. But I will keep that in mind in future. Cheers! Yashthepunisher (talk) 05:28, 17 September 2020 (UTC)