Talk:Rafael Peralta/GA1
Latest comment: 9 years ago by Tomandjerry211 (alt) in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk · contribs) 12:09, 9 August 2015 (UTC)
- Will start later.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 12:09, 9 August 2015 (UTC)
- Comments below:
- Why is there an asterisk that I can see in read mode before "Operation Phantom Force" in the infobox?
- No space between citation and previous sentence
- Anything about his early education?
- Expand the contraction "don't"
- It is standard practice to place external links after the "References" section.
- Seven dead links.
- Inconsistency: "first name last name" and "last name, first name"
- All from me.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 12:19, 9 August 2015 (UTC)
- It has been over two weeks with no response, so unfortunately I have to fail it. Feel free to renominate at any time if these complaints are fixed