Talk:Radio 1 Madonna controversy/GA1

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 18:37, 30 December 2016 (UTC)Reply

Lead

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  • Madonna's single, "Living for Love", → remove both commas here
  • from commercial radio in the UK → from commercial radio in the United Kingdom
  • In response, Madonna fans → In response, the singer's fans (alternation)
  • Unlink "ageism" the second time
  • The single peaked at 26 on the → Commercially, "Living for Love" peaked at number 26 on the

Background

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  • during the promotion of the film, Shanghai Surprise → no comma here
  • and 2006 respectively → comma before "respectively"
  • Year in release of "4 Minutes" in brackets
  • defended the station's decision → state "their decision" here for alternation
  • Madonna saying: "I don't think → : to ,
  • For the quote following, fix all ... to [...]
  • George Ergatoudis stated that the channel's audience → state "its audience" here for alternation

Events

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  • I think it’s going to be all right to play it," Mac concluded → you have to end this sentence with a full stop
  • A representative for the station explained → One of its representatives explained (alternation)

Reception

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  • from Madonna fans → from Madonna's fans
  • for the singer soon spreads to the station's → "spreads" to "spread"
  • Sun, Madonna called the omission → state "she" here for alternation
  • and that ageism was a taboo that is still not being → link "ageism" here to its respective article

BBC rebuttal and aftermath

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  • The station listed David Guetta → The station further listed David Guetta
  • For the following quote, fix ... to [...]
  • He stated "[Radio 1 are] → comma after "stated"
  • top-twenty → top 20
  • top-forty → fix to top 40 in both cases

Other stuff

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Copy-violation

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  • 56.4% is WAY too much! You may want to change something here!

Images

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  • Image from lead needs an explanation
  • For the image from "Events", unlink the single's name
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References

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  • As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article
  • 2 dead links! Please fix!!

Outcome

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