Talk:Pymble Ladies' College

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Edit request from Huskytine, 4 April 2011 edit

Sport

Huskytine (talk) 09:55, 4 April 2011 (UTC)Reply

Can you be a bit more specific about where at that website we can find information that Kristin Jauch was (a) an alumna of PLC; and (b) champion in the years you've given? -danjel (talk to me) 12:45, 4 April 2011 (UTC)Reply

References

  1. ^ www.moosloch-mushers.de

Request for minor corrections and updates to introductory information edit

  Done

In the information box, please change the Chairman from "Kate Mason" to "Braith Williams". http://www.pymblelc.nsw.edu.au/en/About/College-Council.aspx


Please change the last sentence of the third paragraph of the introduction to read "There is also a music building, a chapel, healthcare centre, three boarding houses (Lang, Goodlet and Marden) and the most recent additions - the Gillian Moore Centre for Performing Arts in 2005 and the Senior School Centre - Kate Mason Building in 2011." http://www.pymblelc.nsw.edu.au/en/The-College/Senior-School-Centre.aspx


Please change the first sentence of the fourth paragraph of the introduction to read "Originally, there were three Houses (Lang, Goodlet and Marden) but in 2009, the number of Spirit Houses increased to eight, adding Wylie, Bennett, Ingleholme, Hammond and Thomas." [as found on page 9 of the 2009 Year in review http://www.pymblelc.nsw.edu.au/About/Policies-and-Reports.aspx]


In the second sentence of the fourth paragraph of the introduction, please change "Senior School" to "Secondary School" http://www.pymblelc.nsw.edu.au/Life-at-Pymble/Academic-Courses-and-Results.aspx

--Pymble marketing (talk) 01:04, 18 April 2011 (UTC)Reply

Thanks, semi-protected article, how about correcting a few typos (10, I think), wait a few days so you have an edit history, join us, and do it yourself. Regards (Crusoe8181 (talk) 10:05, 18 April 2011 (UTC)).Reply
I think that Pymble marketing might have a Conflict of Interest, hence the request.
I'll get to it shortly. -danjel (talk to me) 10:27, 18 April 2011 (UTC)Reply
Conflict of Interest is not a problem when dealing with referenced facts -the article is semi-protected so he/she cannot edit (yet), would have done it myself but we should encourage new contributors, should we not?? Regards (Crusoe8181 (talk) 10:52, 18 April 2011 (UTC)).Reply
Better safe than sorry? I don't know. I avoid editing articles of schools with whom I work directly for the same reason... Up to you, Pymble marketing, need us to do it? -danjel (talk to me) 11:01, 18 April 2011 (UTC)Reply

Done. As I said, I'm assuming that they're trying to avoid a WP:COI issue, particularly in light of the name. I played with the wording a little bit because I wasn't quite happy with it. Any clue who the author "Turner" is? -danjel (talk to me) 09:47, 19 April 2011 (UTC)Reply

Objective much? edit

"Pymble Ladies' College was founded in 1916 by Dr John Marden, a man of forward thinking who believed that women should get the best that education offered. Today, the College exemplifies the spirit of its founder as an outstanding school for girls that encourages its students to 'strive for the highest' in all pursuits."

The above is about as nonobjective a statement as I have ever seen on a Wikipedia page, and needs to be addressed immediately. I think I should also submit for a flagging on this article until this is rectified. This is intended to be informative, not an advertisement. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 50.88.35.94 (talk) 11:30, 4 August 2011 (UTC)Reply

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