Talk:Push the Button (Sugababes song)/GA1
Latest comment: 11 years ago by Calvin999 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 13:13, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
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Info box edit
- Order the genres into alphabetical?
- Done. Till
Lead edit
- and an artist whom collaborated with Austin. → and a singer with whom Austin had previously collaborated with.
- Hmm an editor suggested to avoid ending the sentence with "with".
- Okay. Aaron • You Da One 13:58, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
- Hmm an editor suggested to avoid ending the sentence with "with".
- Link music critics
- Done. Till
- , in London. → Remove "in"
- Done. Till
Recording and inspiration edit
- together → collectively
- Done. Till
Composition edit
- Do critics actually cite it as pop and electronic?
- Yeah. Till
- Best put the citations at the end of the sentence then. Aaron • You Da One 13:59, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
- Done. Till
- Best put the citations at the end of the sentence then. Aaron • You Da One 13:59, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
- Yeah. Till
Release edit
- No issues
Response edit
- I made a slight c/e to the section as a whole.
- Heywood described → First name and publication?
- Done. Till
- Hoffman → Same again.
- Done. Till
- Lots of quotes, can you paraphrase some?
- Done. Till
Chart performance edit
- after Freak Like Me, Round Round and Hole in the Head. → These need quotes around them.
- Done. Till
Music video edit
- Buena explained video's → the video's?
- Done. Till
Live performances edit
- No issues.
Track listings edit
- No issues.
Credits and personnel edit
- No issues.
Charts and certifications edit
- Would be good if you could mark up the tables according to WP:ACCESS. If you don't know what this is I can do it for you.
- Okay thanks. what is mark up anyways? Till
- See S&M (song) as an example. It's the darker shaded bit. Aaron • You Da One 14:00, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
- Done. Aaron • You Da One 14:26, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
- Okay thanks. But the convenience arrows are missing. Is it supposed to be like that? Till
- You can add it if you want, isn't essential though. It's already in alphabetical order. Aaron • You Da One
- Okay thanks. But the convenience arrows are missing. Is it supposed to be like that? Till
- Done. Aaron • You Da One 14:26, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
- See S&M (song) as an example. It's the darker shaded bit. Aaron • You Da One 14:00, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
- Okay thanks. what is mark up anyways? Till
References edit
Summary edit
A well written article :). Not that many points to address. On hold 7 days.
- Ty. Till