Talk:Protocol system

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Hi Katey Harris,

I have been asked to peer review your new Wikipedia article as part of our course requirements. My suggestion would be to take a look at the following Wikipedia Template:Reflist. As it appears that some of your references have been set up incorrectly. Good luck!

Smirwin88 (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 01:34, 13 May 2013 (UTC)

Comments from Tong Li

This page mainly focuses on the explanation of protocol system, which gives readers a relatively clear vision on the outline of protocol system, in particular on the two major domains (passive and active systems). Personal suggestions involve some additions and extensions of certain content. When the ‘a set of tools’ was mentioned in 2nd paragraph, more details about these tools could be introduced to provide more information about this system. Also, in this paragraph, protocols were stated to ‘aid in optimising patient care’. In this case, some examples about how this assistance happens could be referred to. Moreover, to assist readers further understanding the mechanism of the protocol system, in Active Protocol Systems section, more details of the ‘trigger automated order-entry systems’ and the ‘appointment scheduling’ are suggested to be complemented. Also, if possible some actual examples about practical application of protocol system could be added beneficially.

Toni Lee (Tong Li) (talk) 00:20, 20 May 2013 (UTC)

Wikipedia Ambassador Program course assignment

This article is the subject of an educational assignment at La Trobe University supported by the Wikipedia Ambassador Program during the 2013 Q1 term. Further details are available on the course page.

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