Talk:Protagonist (Persona 3)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: ProtoDrake (talk · contribs) 11:21, 10 July 2014 (UTC)

It may take a few days, but I'll do my best to review this article. --ProtoDrake (talk) 11:21, 10 July 2014 (UTC)

Review

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Just a few things I might question.

• "As he or she works with SEES" - In the rest of the article, the Protagonist is alluded to exclusively as male, and no option to change gender is mentioned.
• "developing into a mature person as he is initially struck about being an orphan." - Not entirely sure about the grammar here.
• You might want to expand the rational for this image into a full one.
• Maybe you should get a reference for Yurl Lowenthall voicing the character. I can't see one anywhere in this article.
• I think you should change to dmy dates for all references for consistency.

And that's it for now. --ProtoDrake (talk) 07:23, 13 July 2014 (UTC)

Thanks. I already gave it touch.Tintor2 (talk) 15:20, 13 July 2014 (UTC)

Alright. I can't see any other issues. I'll rate this as a Pass. Nice work. --ProtoDrake (talk) 15:55, 13 July 2014 (UTC)