Talk:Priya Cooper/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 00:00, 21 December 2011 (UTC)

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 00:00, 21 December 2011 (UTC)

• "waking up at 4am to get pool time." 4 a.m.
• "Cooper made Paralympic debut at the" made her
• "She is well known and popular in Australia" could this be moved elsewhere in the section or fleshed out a bit more? Right now it feels just tossed in at random.

I'll put the article on hold and will pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 04:32, 21 December 2011 (UTC)

The first two are fixed, and I've just removed the third line, the relevant source does say it, but on examination (my first of the source), he was writing that based on how she was introduced at a celebration before the Sydney Olympics. On balance, I don't consider that reliable enough to include here. Courcelles 04:44, 21 December 2011 (UTC)

Everything checks out now, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 17:20, 21 December 2011 (UTC)