Talk:Pretty Please (song)/GA1
Latest comment: 2 years ago by Kyle Peake in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 09:37, 13 July 2022 (UTC)
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I will start this today, though it won't be done until at least tomorrow. --K. Peake 09:37, 13 July 2022 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
edit- Infobox looks good!
- Add a comma after second studio album
- "and the song's producer" → "and the sole producer"
- Add a sentence between the writing/production and genres one about how the song was created
- "is the opposite. In the lyrics," → "is the opposite; in the lyrics,"
- Remove the usage of very per this not being sourced in the body
- "reached number 48, 79 and" → "reached numbers 48, 79 and"
- "was awarded a gold certification from" → "was awarded a gold certification in Canada from"
- "remix album Club Future Nostalgia." → "remix album, Club Future Nostalgia (2020)."
- Mention that the festival was in 2022 and use "that same year" later on in the sentence
Background and production
edit- Img looks good!
- Pipe mixed to Audio mixing (recorded music)
- Pipe mastered to Mastering (audio)
- "a bunch of music" I don't think this is appropriate language for Wiki
- Wikilink bassline
- "before the chorus. Kirkpatrick used" → "before the chorus and Kirkpatrick used" with the pipe
- Wikilink tempo
- Pipe percussion to Percussion instrument
- "lag a bit" is this really appropriate language?
- "He used LFO tool" → "Kirkpatrick used LFO tool"
- "Kirkpatrick used the LFO tool to make" → "The tool also had the purpose of making"
- "He also used a" → "Kirkpatrick further used a"
- Pipe snare to Snare drum
- Img looks good!
- "decided to leave it in" → "decided to leave the instrument in"
- "he wanted to make it" → "the producer wanted to make it"
- "in the hook. Kirkpatrick used an" → "in the hook and used an"
- "he included a part from" → "the producer included a section from"
- Wikilink melodyne per MOS:LINK2SECT
Music and lyrics
edit- Remove wikilink on midtempo
- Remove wikilink on tempo
- [12][13][14][15][9] is too many refs grouped together, so move some around to the appropriate areas of the sentence
- [19] should only be invoked once in the sentence
- Wikilink synthesizer
- "for stress-reliving" → "for stress-relieving" on the audio sample text
- "the live bass. This chorus also introduces a beeping sounds." → "the live bass while beeping sounds are introduced."
- Wikilink tambourine
- I don't think spine-tingling is very neutral here
- "when she sings" → "when Lipa sings"
- "but realizing that unlike them." what does this mean? Please clarify...
- "sums up the song's" → "sum up the song's"
Release and promotion
edit- Img looks good!
- Wikilink lyric video per MOS:LINK2SECT
- "released on 9 April." → "released on 9 April 2020."
- Pipe New York house to Garage house
- Pipe acoustic to Acoustic music
- Pipe Tiny Desk Concert to Tiny Desk Concerts
Reception
edit- "on Future Nostalgia saying" → "on Future Nostalgia, saying"
- "called it a "slinky" monster and stated it's" → "called the song a "slinky" monster and stated it is"
- "complimented "airtight" and" → "complimented the "airtight" and"
- "Writing for, Pitchfork Anna Gaca noted" → "For Pitchfork, Anna Gaca noted"
- Pipe ballad to Sentimental ballad
- "a "flurry of" → "a "flurr[y] of" per alteration of the source
- "called it a" → "labeled the song a"
- "The Midland refix was nominated" → "The Midland remix was nominated"
- "79 in Slovakia and 101" → "number 79 in Slovakia and number 101"
Track listings
edit- Add the appropriate sources for these
Personnel
edit- Good
Charts
edit- Good
Certifications
edit- Good
References
edit- Copyvio score looks incredible at 9.1%!!!!
- Remove or replace ref 17 per WP:RSP
- Cite Dancing Astronaut as publisher instead on ref 32
- On ref 49, is the first citation really reliable when it is aligned as far-right? Also, cite Universo Online and Trome as publishers instead.
External links
edit- Good
Final comments and verdict
edit- On hold until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 19:59, 14 July 2022 (UTC)
- ✗ Fail after no response; this is disappointing from an experienced user like LOVI33. --K. Peake 07:42, 2 August 2022 (UTC)