Talk:Preise, Jerusalem, den Herrn, BWV 119/GA1
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Smerus in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Smerus (talk · contribs) 11:04, 29 August 2015 (UTC)
Well written
editOverall absolutely acceptable. Two quibbles which I would raise:
- History and words - 'Bach could count on the entire council (his employer) listening, and likely also civil servants' - 'probably' is better than 'likely' in colloquial English.
- Scoring and structure - I suggest adding 'the musicologist' or 'the editor' before 'Alfred Durr' so that it is clear where this is coming from.
Verifiable with no original research
editWell sourced and cited as one would expect from this editor.
Broad in its coverage, Neutral
editExemplary on both counts and well-focussed.
Stable
editNo problems
Images
editAppropriate images and clear tables
Summary
editI have no problems in passing this for GA, but the editor might like to take a look at the two quibbles under "Well-written".--Smerus (talk) 11:04, 29 August 2015 (UTC)
- Thank you, done, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:31, 29 August 2015 (UTC)
- Excellent, super article.--Smerus (talk) 11:37, 29 August 2015 (UTC)