Talk:Powers, Principalities, Thrones and Dominions/GA1
Latest comment: 12 years ago by Gen. Quon in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 04:46, 29 May 2012 (UTC)
- Plot: "Watts contacts Black for help with the case. However, Black is still recovering from the murder of his friend Bob Bletcher" Is this in the present, or are we still in flashback mode?
- Plot: "...as evidence disappears or witnesses fail to identify him in a line-up..." I would change 'or' to 'and'
- Production: "...as well as directing..." -> "...as well as direct..."
- Reception: Maybe its just me, but although the DVD Talk review is sort of mixed, all the rest seem to be positive, so I'd change "mixed to positive" to "moderately positive" or something of the like
- References: Ref 14 has the wrong title attached to it
- References: Ref 15 has the wrong title attached to it
Those are the only issues (aside from the fact that I love the Oxford Comma and this title doesn't have one, but I digress) that I could find. On hold.--Gen. Quon (talk) 23:38, 29 May 2012 (UTC)