Talk:Power pop/GA1
Latest comment: 2 years ago by ILIL in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 23:07, 10 January 2022 (UTC)
Hello! I'll be taking a look at this article for the January 2022 GAN backlog drive. If you haven't already signed up, please feel free to join in! Although QPQ is not required, if you're feeling generous, I also have a list of GA nominations of my own right here.
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Infobox and lede edit
- Don't love "happy" in quotes per MOS:QUOTEPOV; is there a synonym that wouldn't dilute the intended meaning?
Definition and etymology edit
Characteristics edit
- "mid 1960s" → "mid-1960s"
Scope and recognition edit
- "coined the term"
- ""blissful indifference,"" → ""blissful indifference"," per MOS:LQ
Original waves edit
1960s: Origins and precursors edit
- Link "jangly" to Jangle
- Also link rockabilly and doo-wop
1970s: Emergence edit
- It's repeated twice almost verbatim that the Raspberries were the only band to have hit singles in this section; one should be removed or rephrased. I would probably take out the second-paragraph reference since it's in the middle of a larger section on Badfinger, whereas the last para is about the Raspberries
1970s-1980s: Commercial peak and decline edit
- Good
Succeeding waves edit
1980s-1990s: Alternative rock edit
- Comma after "Redd Kross and the Spongetones" that should probably be a period
- The "the" in Los Angeles Times does not need to be capitalized or italicized
- And unfortunately, per MOS:'S, it should be "Times's"
1990s-2010s: Continued interest edit
- Good
References edit
- The two Magnet Magazine refs need to be fixed: [9] has "Magnet Magazine" in the title parameter and www.magnetmagazine.com in the work, whereas it should just have "Magnet" in the work, while [16] and [17]'s work just says "magazine"
- Per MOS:ALLCAPS, [16] and [17] should also be in title case, not all caps
General comments edit
- Images and audio clips are properly licensed and relevant
- No stability concerns in the revision history
- Earwig score is artificially inflated by direct quotes & proper nouns, no obvious problems once the actual text is checked
Putting on hold to allow nominator to address comments. Feel free to ping me with questions, and let me know when you're finished. — GhostRiver 16:36, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
- On hold for a week with no response and no changes to the article, so unfortunately I'm going to have to fail this one. You or anyone else is, of course, welcome to resubmit. — GhostRiver 17:54, 24 January 2022 (UTC)
- Done @GhostRiver: Sorry I've been very busy and haven't been able to get around to this until just now. ili (talk) 18:30, 24 January 2022 (UTC)