Talk:Pow (Elvana Gjata song)/GA1

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:16, 20 April 2022 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Yet another review of an old nom! --K. Peake 07:16, 20 April 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Infobox looks good!
• "and produced by" → "while produced by"
• "was applauded by" → "received positive reviews from numerous" or something similar, per the usage of selected in the body and the small amount of critics
• Wikilink music video
• Remove wikilink on New York City per WP:OVERLINK and the US introduction, as everyone knows where that place is
• "the song found commercial success," → "the song achieved success," and remove the Switzerland position per it being too low for lead notability

Background and composition

• "on her social media in" → "on her Instagram in" per the source, with the wikilink
• "was noted by a critical commentary" → "was noted by critical commentary"
• Add a source at the end of the last sentence for the runtime
• "garnered positive reviews from" → "was met with positive reviews from"
• Remove website introduction to Illyrian Pirates and attribute the review to someone, preferably "the staff of". Also, what exactly makes this source reliable?
• "The website pointed out that its her" → "The staff went on to point out her"
• Remove website introductions to Dosja and Top Music, also attribute reviews to someone; you could use something like "a writer for" instead of the staff to be less reptitive
• "were the most focusing" → "are the most focusing"
• "ending 22 February 2022," → "ending 20 February 2022," per the source

Promotion

• Retitle to Music video per this being the only form of promotion listed
• Wikilink music video on the img text and remove wikilink on New York City per WP:OVERLINK
• "An accompanying music video for "Pow"" → "A music video for "Pow""
• "having been also credited as" → "who also received credit as"
• Remove wikilink on New York City
• "across the city, including at the" → "across the city, including the"
• Again, attribute the Illyrian Pirates review to someone
• "and commended the Gjata's fashion" → "and commended Gjata's fashion"
• Remove the word Greek before Mikropragmata
• Remove introductions to Njeshi and Gazeta Metro, attributing the reviews to someone per earlier
• "similarly lauded her fashion noting" → "similarly lauded her style, noting"

Track listing

• Remove this section because it is a one track single and the length is sourced in the body

Personnel

• Are there enough persons credited to create this section?

Section created. Iaof2017 (talk) 11:48, 20 April 2022 (UTC)

Charts

• Good

Release history

• Good

References

• Copyvio score looks nearly perfect at 2.0%!!!
• Remove Apple Music from the titles of ref 3's citations and add the countries in brackets for the publishers
• Cite YouTube in the via parameter instead on ref 5
• Again, what makes ref 6 a reliable source? I see no evidence of an editorial process or the source being mentioned by well-regarded ones.

I have been in communication with the staff of the website, and it's a relatively new website, which I was told was created back in January/February 2022. Unfortunately, there is no other website dedicated to Albanian music, reviews and all related stuff at all. Iaof2017 (talk) 11:48, 20 April 2022 (UTC)

• Remove or replace ref 7 per WP:SELFPUB

Removed. Iaof2017 (talk) 11:48, 20 April 2022 (UTC)

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until all of the issues are fixed, after reviewing this decent article! --K. Peake 09:30, 20 April 2022 (UTC)

Hey @Kyle Peake:, thanks for your review. I solved your comments! Iaof2017 (talk) 11:48, 20 April 2022 (UTC)

• ✓ Pass now, I take no issue with the sources used now! --K. Peake 20:44, 20 April 2022 (UTC)