Talk:Pope Benedict XVI and Judaism

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C==Quality== This article needs a lot of work. The tone is largely negative, eg it isn't just describing the events, it is making commentary on them. Now, I am willing to admit that relationships have deteriorated, but in some places (such as Auswitch) it feels like an effort was made to find somebody who said something negative about the event. But that isn't the part of the article that needs the most work. There are a lot of places where sections begin with "However" or "Yet more strains." This is sloppy writing. Some of these sections need to be consolodated (for example the sections on Israel), the order of sections needs to be revised (right now it feels like a hodge podge of issues with no real logical flow.)---I'm Spartacus! ^{NO! I'm Spartacus!} 17:52, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

Much of the material was originally pasted from various earlier articles that had been using the same kind of language. Improvements are welcomed of course. ADM (talk) 06:19, 14 June 2009 (UTC)

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Looking for better references... those two aren't what I thought they were...---I'm Spartacus! ^{NO! I'm Spartacus!} 21:10, 11 June 2009 (UTC)