Talk:Police Integrity Commission
Latest comment: 13 years ago by Andrewa in topic Lead grammar
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Lead grammar edit
Current article reads in part ...is a corporation established by the New South Wales Government to prevent, detect and investigate alleged serious misconduct... but surely the purpose is to prevent and detect actual misconduct. The scope of alleged should be restricted to misconduct which is to be investigated; Only actual misconduct can be prevented or detected. Andrewa (talk) 18:26, 4 May 2011 (UTC)