Talk:Pocket Operators

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Promotional text edit

Latest comment: 1 year ago3 comments2 people in discussion

Hello Schminnte. In reply to your message asking about specific areas where the promotional tone is an issue, unfortunately it affects most of the article. Some examples are " the inexpensive Pocket Operator was a surprise to the music industry", "Pocket Operators share the same eccentric minimalist design", "Following on from the success of the Pocket Operators". Regards, MrsSnoozyTurtle 05:58, 31 December 2022 (UTC)Reply

@MrsSnoozyTurtle:, if it is promotional then shouldn't it be a tag for that? I'll change that and get into it Schminnte (talk • contribs) 11:47, 31 December 2022 (UTC)Reply

Hi, I've tried to remove all the promotional language that I could see and have removed the tag for that reason. Feel free to add it back or delete any more wording that you find. Thanks. Schminnte (talk • contribs) 12:05, 31 December 2022 (UTC)Reply

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