Talk:Pocket-Greenhaven, Sacramento, California

Latest comment: 16 years ago by 76.105.44.122

Needs work. Lacks substance. Style is awkward, especially in history section. Neutrality questionable ("The upper echelon of Greenhaven or the Pocket area is Riverlake, a series of gated communities[?]" Upper echelon according to what metric?), somewhat boosterish. 76.105.44.122 (talk) 08:38, 23 June 2008 (UTC)Reply