Talk:Pin Malakul/GA1

GA Review

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This article has been extremely well prepared for GAN and is an easy pass. Honestly, usually I have a list of things to be fixed and some serious issues that need to be addressed, but I'm passing this article immediately! By way of feedback, per Wikipedia:STYLE#Punctuation_and_inline_citations all inline citations should usually directly follow a punctuation mark. Also, if this article is to progress to FAC, I would suggest submitting it to a good WP:copy edit to smooth over some awkward phrases and minor syntactical problems.

Congratulations on an article well done! --Eustress (talk) 22:29, 21 December 2008 (UTC)