Talk:Piel Castle/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 21:29, 12 October 2013 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:29, 12 October 2013 (UTC)

• No DABs, external links good, no overlinks
• Images appropriately licensed.
• How would an abbey in Cumbria smuggling goods upset merchants in Calais?

• A consequence of the Company of the Staple - I've clarified in the text. Hchc2009 (talk) 08:55, 19 October 2013 (UTC)

• So erosion has eaten the eastern and southern walls of each bailey? Do I read that rightly?

• I think so. Hchc2009 (talk) 08:55, 19 October 2013 (UTC)

• Number ranges need an en-dash, not a hyphen.

• Fixed. Hchc2009 (talk) 08:55, 19 October 2013 (UTC)

• Use title case in "The Parish of Dalton"

• Fixed. Hchc2009 (talk) 08:55, 19 October 2013 (UTC)

• First word of subtitles is capitalized.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:13, 16 October 2013 (UTC)

• Fixed. Hchc2009 (talk) 08:55, 19 October 2013 (UTC)