Talk:Pickle Rick/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 00:46, 12 July 2021 (UTC)

• Add a short description and alt text to every image.
  •  Done — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
• "by Breaking Bad" → "by the Breaking Bad" (both times)
  •  Done — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
• "Beth's unhealthy relationship with Rick, and Beth and Rick's views" → "Beth's unhealthy relationship with Rick and their views"
  •  Done — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
• Add a serial comma after "Danny Trejo (as Jaguar)".
  •  Done — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
• "It won" → "It won Rick and Morty" - the Outstanding Animated Program award was given to the show for this episode.
  •  Done — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
• Plot is less than 400 words so that passes WP:TVPLOT.
• Add a comma after "sets up a lab in the sewer".
  •  Done — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
• "group are" → "group is" (American English)
  •  Done — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
• "" - WP:CITEBUNDLE please
  •  Done — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
• Check for ordering issues:

• "" → ""
• "" → ""
• "" → ""
• "" → ""
• "" → ""
• "" → ""
• "" → ""

•  Done — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)

• "Afterwards" → "Afterward" (American English)
  •  Done — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
• "a number of" is kinda wordy. I would suggest using "several" instead.
  •  Done — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
• "a breakfast cereal and in-game" → "breakfast cereal, and in-game"
  •  Done — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
• Scheeden - typo.
  • Good spot,  Done — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
• Russian mobsters" → Russian mobsters",
  •  Done — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
• "relationship to" → "relationship with"
  •  Done — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
• Add a serial comma after "8.7 out of 10 in IGN".
  •  Done — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
• Where do the quotes "emphasized the pickle-ness" and "too adorable" come from?
  • The (YouTube) video embedded in the given source ("Design Sneak Peek"). — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
• Vulture should link to Vulture (website) since it is the website version of a magazine.
  •  Done — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
• The award table should be formatted for accessibility to screen readers. As a result, move the scope row to the "Award" category (see here).
  • Had a go—does it look right now? — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
• Mark references from Los Angeles Times with "|url-access=limited".
  •  Done — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
• Mark references from Vulture with "|url-access=limited".
  • Is that true? I could be getting mixed up between sources, but I don't think I've ever hit a paywall or article limit on Vulture. — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
• That's it. Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 12:38, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
  • @Some Dude From North Carolina: thanks for the review! Couple of questions/replies and the rest are done. — Bilorv (talk) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)

@Bilorv: Great work; passing the article. Interesting article to expand and an interesting read overall. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 02:08, 13 July 2021 (UTC)