Talk:Phyllomedusa burmeisteri

Wiki Education assignment: Behavioral Ecology 2022

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 30 August 2022 and 9 December 2022. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Jumping frog princess (article contribs). Peer reviewers: Eylul.horozoglu, ShawnMohammed, Gracedekoker.

— Assignment last updated by CalJS (talk) 02:15, 14 October 2022 (UTC)

Comments

I revised a lot of spelling and grammatical stuff for the article. I also added a couple new subsections: warning calls, parental care, and diet. I hope these additional subsections will help the article flow better. I also rewrote a couple of portions of the article to make it more digestible. I did not change any of the information discussed in the article, rather I changed the presentation of this information. I think that there can more information about the conservation of these frogs, even though they seem to be resistant to environmental changes (I felt this section could be fleshed out more). Overall great work! ShawnMohammed (talk) 02:20, 19 October 2022 (UTC)

Peer Review

I changed the structure a bit, making sure it roughly followed the Wikipedia guidelines. I left some stuff intact because it flowed better (for example the hunting and diet parts). I then noticed that there were a bunch of duplicate citations, so I removed those. I also added some more hyperlinks.

Eylul.horozoglu (talk) 08:40, 20 October 2022 (UTC)

Peer Reviews

This was a really strong article! There wasn't much content that I changed. I did move the order around just to help it flow better and to stick with Wikipedia's general article format. I also moved the territoriality to a subheading vs section heading because it fit more appropriately there. I added a lot of hyperlinks to the geographic locations and Brazilian states, and in the contributions to science section. Lastly I just cleaned up some grammar and punctuation issues, or reorganized sentence structure to make more sense and lead with the most important information. I also italicized species names or changed longer words to acronyms after first mention. I added in a little more information about why researchers are looking at these frogs especially for novel peptides as potential new therapeutics- you should look at at the source and get more content form it! Last comment- what is the difference between BUR and BUR-J/what do they stand for? Other than that, great article! Gracedekoker (talk) 03:46, 21 October 2022 (UTC)gracedekoker Gracedekoker (talk) 03:46, 21 October 2022 (UTC)gracedekoker