Lead section

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Any suggestions about the introduction of this article?

Read wp:Lead. An important start would be including the name of the subject in the lead. It should be able to stand on its own as a summary. Right now, in reading the lead, it's not even clear what the subject is. --Omarcheeseboro (talk) 13:17, 12 April 2009 (UTC)Reply

2007 publications are missing here

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The 1970s excavations were published only in 2007. There Renfrew revises the stratigraphy and the building of periods.

You really need

  • The British School at Athens, Supplementary Volume 42, 2007. ISBN 978-0-904887-54-9

and to cover the following scientific debate:

  • Todd Whitelaw: A tale of three cities – chronology and minoanization at Phylakopi in Melos. In: A. Dakouri-Hild; S. Sherratt (Hrsg.): Autochthon – Papers presented to O. T. K. Dickinson on the Occasion of his Retirement. Oxford 2005, ISBN 978-1841718682
  • Neil Brodie: A Reassessment of Mackenzie's Second and Third Cities at Phylakopi. In: The Annual of the British School at Athens. Band 104, 2009, ISSN 0068-2454.

Hope you can get those papers and improve the article, right now it is as of 2004. --h-stt !? 15:37, 14 April 2014 (UTC)Reply