Talk:Phoenician settlement of North Africa

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Wiki Education assignment: The Phoenicians - Cunning Seafarers edit

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Copyvios edit

there are significant copyvios in this article. entire paragraphs are copied with the lightest of edits or paraphrasing

some examples below. It needs a significant rewrite

The article

  • Both overpopulation in the Levant and the allure of trade played a significant role in prompting the Phoenicians to migrate west.

The source [1]

  • Both overpopulation in the Levant and the allure of trade played a significant role in the push towards migration.


The article

  • new pottery and radiocarbon dates confirm that the Phoenicians started migrating westwards before the Assyrians imposed tribute on their homeland

The source [2]

  • new pottery and radiocarbon dates confirm that the Phoenicians started migrating westwards before the Assyrian Empire put pressure on their homeland\

The article

  • The densest Phoenician settlement in North Africa was on the coasts of present-day Tunisia,

The source [3]

  • The densest Phoenician settlement in North Africa was to be found on on the coasts of what is now Tunisia,


The article

  • The native peoples had to give up the largest and best part of the coast to the Phoenician settlers.

The source [4]

  • To the Phoenicians the native peoples had to give up the largest and best part of the Northern coast

the rest of this paragraph is an extremely close paraphrase


The article

  • The absence of Phoenician records detailing their migrations, combined with the fact that many sites remain either partially or completely unexcavated,

The source [5]

  • With no Phoenician acount detailing their migrations, and with the majority of sites remaining either partially or completely unexcavated,

2001:8F8:1B69:1AFD:30A9:6768:87CA:4A82 (talk) 08:49, 3 May 2024 (UTC)Reply