Talk:Philz Coffee

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Astronomifier in topic Advertize-y Language

Advertize-y Language edit

This article makes multiple unsourced claims, some of which sound like an Ad. Examples: "and is considered a major player in third wave coffee" – already tagged as dubious. "San Francisco's Mission District for over 25 years and had strong ties to the community." Here, "over 25" is less specific and more informal than listing the exact time frame, and "strong ties" are a matter of opinion. "In addition to its extensive line of coffee and drinks," Is it extensive? That's also opinion and advertise-y. Also, the list of locations in first paragraph is unsourced. Astronomifier (talk) 15:34, 20 April 2023 (UTC)Reply