Talk:Phillip Jeong

I posted a request for help to improve the article through copy editing, and many editors assisted. I also discussed the tone and flow of the article quite vigorously with ChatGPT-4 and corrected the article accordingly. What more can I do to remove the box above? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Rosuacamus (talk • contribs)

I suggest you discuss the tone with a human being, rather than with ChatGPT. A good place to start is Wikipedia:Teahouse, where you'll find friendly help. Thanks, Wikishovel (talk) 04:16, 8 June 2024 (UTC)

Yes I will. You are a great help, Thanks. Rosuacamus (talk) 04:57, 8 June 2024 (UTC)

The article has a Notability tag now. I saw some fierce discussions on similar issues in other articles. He has three albums with Universal Music (Decca): a participation album, Feel in Duo album, and a full album as Miraclass. I was going to write a separate article for Miraclass and therefore excluded Jeong's work with the group from his own article. Would elaborating on his group activities help address the notability issue? The crossover market in Korea is substantial, and many singers from the TV program Phantom Singer are recruited as musical actors in Korea. The stage musical market size is comparable to the so-called K-pop market, at about 25% of that of Broadway. Two of the Miraclass members are prominent figures in the Korean musical market. While these points may not directly prove his notability, consider that he has three Decca albums and performs in Hong Kong, which is outside Korea.

poorly written content

"He also exhibited enjoyment during the quartet mission, performing "La Vita" what does this even mean? and "a non-regular member of the Busan Metropolitan Chorus" how is is this even worth mentioning? and "In line with the colorful character of this lively two-member team, their first performance started uniquely with an in-flight concert on an Asiana Airlines" content like this does NOT belong in an encyclopaedia article. Theroadislong (talk) 13:25, 8 June 2024 (UTC)

I will rewrite the text altogether with citations and quotations from newspaper and magazine articles, and remove the tables. Please look up the article in a few days. I welcome your critical comments and understand that you aim to improve the article and make Wikipedia a reliable encyclopedia. Rosuacamus (talk) 13:57, 8 June 2024 (UTC)

Revisions to the Phillip Jeong Article

I reworked the Phillip Jeong article by tidying up the text, removing tables, and adding citations. I welcome editors once again for critical comments and suggestions to improve the article.

@Theroadislong:, @Wikishovel:, @David notMD: User:Theroadislong, User:Wikishovel, User:David notMD, User:Rosuacamus Rosuacamus (talk) 11:46, 10 June 2024 (UTC)