Talk:Phillip Davey/GA1
Latest comment: 7 years ago by Krishna Chaitanya Velaga in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 13:08, 4 July 2017 (UTC)
Will take this one. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 13:08, 4 July 2017 (UTC)
- Lead and infobox;
- After being accidentally wounded, gassed and promoted to the rank of lance corporal, he was awarded the Military Medal in January 1918 for bravery in the field.; This entire sentence reads vague, it is something this he was promoted and awarded the medal for being wounded and gassed. Please rephrase
- he single-handedly killed an eight-man German machine gun crew -> he killed an eight-man German machine gun crew alone; or something similar, I feel that "single-handedly killed" doesn't comply with the NPOV
- Please consider splitting the lead into two for improving the flow and readability
- Section 1; all good
- Section 2;
- Section 3; all good
- 65% confidence, violation possible. But I understand that this is due to the citation quote of the medal.
- Very well written. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 10:23, 16 July 2017 (UTC)
- Thanks Krishna. I believe I have addressed all your comments. The earwig result is from the quotes. See what you think? Regards, Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 10:43, 16 July 2017 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 14:09, 23 July 2017 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail: