Talk:Philippine ceramics

Latest comment: 4 years ago by Lilit Arustamyan

Hello, I enjoyed reading your article but I have a few suggestions. The first sentence of the lead includes an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic. However, I believe the introduction is too short and it does not include a brief description of the article's major sections. The introduction should be improved because it only gave a brief description of what are Philippine Ceramics.Lilit Arustamyan (talk) 02:49, 5 December 2019 (UTC)Reply