Talk:Peyk-i Şevket-class cruiser/GA1

Latest comment: 9 years ago by Sturmvogel 66 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 23:07, 17 February 2015 (UTC)Reply


I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:07, 17 February 2015 (UTC)Reply

  • No DABs, external links OK.
  • Image appropriately licensed.
  • Standardize on ftin conversions from meters, please.
    • I think the only one of these I saw was the draft figure in the box, which is now fixed.
      • I actually meant for you to add them for all of the conversions, but I went ahead and added them myself.
  • as a torpedo cruiser by the Ottoman Navy,[1] was also sometimes referred to as Missing conjunction, I think.
    • Good catch.
  • The ships were powered by a pair of vertical triple-expansion engines each driving a screw propeller. The ships' four Awkward, howzabout "their" for the beginning of the second sentence?
    • Works for me.
  • Watch your rounding; 450mm isn't 18 inches.
    • These dang conversion templates...
  • Link to definition of caliber.
    • It's already there.
      • Ooops, indeed it was!
  • Title case for Erickson, please.
    • Fixed.
  • 500th GA review! You should feel honored ;-) Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:19, 24 February 2015 (UTC)Reply