Talk:Petrillo Music Shell

GA Review

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Reviewer: Mikemoral (talk · contribs)

• Construction on the wood and fiber E. V. Buchsbaum design began on a budget of $12,500 ($178,618 in current dollar terms), and the opening of free concerts commenced on August 24, 1931.

  Just as a general note, the MOS says to include the type of dollars, but I'm assuming that it would be US dollars. The phrase "current dollar terms" could probably be better worded as "in today's dollars" or something similar.

  • O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 01:56, 27 May 2010 (UTC)
• In 1953 a referendum was almost held on the November 3 Election Day ballot for a $3 million ($24.4 million in current dollar terms) structure, but at the last minute a bond issue was denied.

  Again, the phrase "current dollar terms" is still somewhat awkward, in my opinion.

  • I presume the reader will catch on after the first time.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 01:56, 27 May 2010 (UTC)

  I must apologize, but real life has caught up with my Internet time. Unfortunately, I will be unable to complete the GA review until I’m done with RL stuff. —Mikemoral♪♫ 02:03, 27 May 2010 (UTC)

Review

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality:

   B. MoS compliance:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources:

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

   Looks good, I'd suggest the lead be trimmed a bit, but I'm not going to fail the GA over that.

—Mikemoral♪♫ 00:37, 9 June 2010 (UTC)

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