Talk:Pet Supplies "Plus"

Point of View Problem

This article reads like a corporate brochure. Is there a way to make it seem more impartial? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.191.189.74 (talk) 04:38, 28 June 2011 (UTC)

Inded. I did some drastic editing, and there remains some repetition to remove. There is also one remaining contradictory statement: the lede says all the stories are franchised, the history section says that some are. DGG ( talk ) 23:56, 12 March 2012 (UTC)