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B class review edit
B class. The Night operations section is very long. Please consider adding 1 or 2 more section headers. Thanks. Djmaschek (talk) 04:08, 21 June 2021 (UTC)
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 13:54, 6 September 2021 (UTC)
Comments
- "to Fighter Command and" link.
- "the Blitz" link.
- "intruder missions" what were they?
- "Christchurch in New Zealand' link ChCh.
- "Territorial Force" link?
- "pilot officer" link that rank.
- "he Battle of France commenced " link.
- "missions.[5][4]" ref order.
- "the Midlands" link.
- Link for Drem?
- Body needs to make mention that he was considered a flying ace, that's only mentioned in the lead.
That's it for me. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:21, 6 September 2021 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review The Rambling Man, I have responded with these edits and comments above. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 10:32, 7 September 2021 (UTC)