Talk:Paul Martin (illustrator)

Latest comment: 9 years ago by EBY3221 in topic Assessment/C

Pending edit

Greetings. Am pasting this ref here pending further instructions as to where it belongs (alternatively, if you paste the whole thing after the piece of text it refers to, run the cursor over it to highlight it, and then click on the blue <ref></ref> it will all appear "magically" in the corresponding section):

2. Famous Trademarks: America A to Z, by Reader's Digest, 1997, pp. 364-65.

--Technopat (talk) 12:33, 28 March 2010 (UTC)Reply

American Red Cross edit

I came across a poster by Martin on internet, but unfortunately it's on the kind of website that Wikipedia doesn't accept as a reliable source. It might be helpful as a line of inquiry for those of you who like looking for sources (I had a look at the online American Red Cross Museum, but drew a blank): Poster he made for the American Junior Red Cross--Technopat (talk) 13:36, 28 March 2010 (UTC)Reply

Assessment/C edit

This article has the structure, sourcing, and narrative of a 'B' article but needs a little work on tone - sentences like "One of these unheralded players was Paul Martin, whose work graced the covers..." 'Unheralded' and 'graced' are both loaded adjectives that would work great in a magazine article but aren't encyclopedic.EBY (talk) 17:04, 26 July 2013 (UTC)Reply

I've greatly refined this article over the past six months. It was toned down as suggested. Two pictures were added (Graphic Artists' section / left side). References were upped from 85 to 105. It can't be improved upon that much. I hope it will now qualify as a B article. Jim Percy (talk) 15:53, 13 January 2014 (UTC) PS. Thanks for your assessment of July 2013.Reply

Well done. Upgraded assessment. EBY (talk) 03:23, 3 November 2014 (UTC)Reply