Talk:Patented track crane
Latest comment: 4 years ago by Bobbychan193 in topic Article feedback
| This is the talk page for discussing improvements to the Patented track crane article. This is not a forum for general discussion of the article's subject. |
Article policies
|
| Find sources: Google (books · news · scholar · free images · WP refs) · FENS · JSTOR · TWL |
 | This article is rated Start-class on Wikipedia's content assessment scale. It is of interest to the following WikiProjects: | |||||||
| ||||||||
Article feedback edit
Courtesy pinging major contributors @AshSkidmore and John M Wolfson: After copy editing the article, I've compiled some feedback for future improvements:
- I was a bit confused on how the History section relates to article's subject. Are "underhung cranes" the same thing as patented track cranes?
- What's the difference between patented track cranes and patented track rails? The Characteristics section seems to focus on the rails when the article is supposed to be about cranes
- The Applications section lists no applications.
- More citations are needed throughout the article.
- Existing citations need to be cleaned up and improved.
- Further reading seems like a laundry list; might be better to only pick a few noteworthy links and delete the rest.
Best of luck with the article. Bobbychan193 (talk) 09:10, 13 October 2019 (UTC)