Talk:Parvati Holcomb/GA1
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Reviewer: Kung Fu Man (talk · contribs) 16:33, 26 January 2024 (UTC)
Alright, so did a light copyedit of the article, only one major thought in the aftermath: I do feel the article could use a description of the character's appearance and design. I know they went a bit light on the concept art for this title from what I recall, but such info can be useful for the visually impaired and get a better feel of the character they're reading about.
Other than that, spot check on sources 4, 8, 14, and 16 all match up. No comments on prose as they were already tweaked. [1] showed no copyright violations ("Fap2Pixels"...seriously?...seems to have copied information from here than vice versa. What a weird thing to name a website...).--Kung Fu Man (talk) 16:33, 26 January 2024 (UTC)
- @Kung Fu Man: I have expanded the section to include notes on her outfit (overalls and goggles), her ethnicity, and her southern drawl. - Cukie Gherkin (talk) 17:04, 26 January 2024 (UTC)
- Works for me. Article passed!--Kung Fu Man (talk) 17:12, 26 January 2024 (UTC)