Talk:Pam's Replacement/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Matthew R Dunn (talk · contribs) 17:15, 27 December 2011 (UTC)

Hello, I shall conduct the review of this article. -- Matthew RD 17:15, 27 December 2011 (UTC)

Criteria

1. Well written: See notes below
2. Sources: See notes below
3. Broadness in coverage: ✓ Pass
4. Neutral: ✓ Pass
5. Stable: ✓ Pass
6. Images: ✓ Pass

• In the lead section, perhaps you can add full names to the character.
• "Robert (James Spader) surprises Andy (Ed Helms), Kevin (Brian Baumgartner), and Darryl (Craig Robinson) when he asks to join their band." He? Surely him, or her?
• Is it Kathy or Cathy? The infobox and plot sections has them spelt the same.
• After reading the reviews section, it seems more mixed that mixed-to-negative.
• Two Office Tally pages were referenced, but one was published as "Office Tally", the other "Officetally.com". Sort this out please

I'll place the review on hold for seven days. -- Matthew RD 17:02, 30 December 2011 (UTC)

OK, I believe I've fixed all the problems! Let me know.--Gen. Quon (talk) 00:45, 31 December 2011 (UTC)

Well done, pass. -- Matthew RD 16:37, 31 December 2011 (UTC)