Talk:Pam's Replacement/GA1

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Matthew R Dunn in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Matthew R Dunn (talk · contribs) 17:15, 27 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

Hello, I shall conduct the review of this article. -- Matthew RD 17:15, 27 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

Criteria

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  1. Well written: See notes below
  2. Sources: See notes below
  3. Broadness in coverage:  Pass
  4. Neutral:  Pass
  5. Stable:  Pass
  6. Images:  Pass
  • In the lead section, perhaps you can add full names to the character.
  • "Robert (James Spader) surprises Andy (Ed Helms), Kevin (Brian Baumgartner), and Darryl (Craig Robinson) when he asks to join their band." He? Surely him, or her?
  • Is it Kathy or Cathy? The infobox and plot sections has them spelt the same.
  • After reading the reviews section, it seems more mixed that mixed-to-negative.
  • Two Office Tally pages were referenced, but one was published as "Office Tally", the other "Officetally.com". Sort this out please

I'll place the review on hold for seven days. -- Matthew RD 17:02, 30 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

OK, I believe I've fixed all the problems! Let me know.--Gen. Quon (talk) 00:45, 31 December 2011 (UTC)Reply
Well done, pass. -- Matthew RD 16:37, 31 December 2011 (UTC)Reply